Raven Hair Valentine
62Ok guys here is some help, I figure so many guys don’t have poems in them, I thought I’d go ahead and do a few for the Hub mob this week, I won’t copyright any of them till Feb 16tth so you can use them as you see fit. We start with one inspired by one of my Hub Muses, Though I will not kiss and tell, so if you think it’s you, if you think you have stirred what passions reside in the little furnace of my heart, then you’re probably right! I love ya!
Raven Hair Valentine
Oh ye so fair of Raven Hair
Love sparkles in your Eyes;
The curve of hip and breast and thigh
Speak of hearts pleasures
Textured skin in cool fresh air
As soft red silk robe falls leaving it bare.
Sun lights soft breast
Drawing shadow and crevice
Round loves sweet orbs
Pink pinnacles high
Inviting soft kiss
As they point to the sky…
Soft sweet crown of your shoulder
Oh silky smooth neck
Loves nibble ‘pon here and here and there
Large hands I slowly draw
up sweeping curves of your back
As heat of the moment
Begins passions sweet yearning
The breeze through the Window
Can not cool Passions flame!
The wind does but fan it white hot in my brain..
The forge of my heart glows red in the night
As raven hair I kiss, and hip and thigh
Soft knee, and calf, ankles and toes
My lips do cuddle dare say I caress?
Now oneness we seek
From our hips to our lips
Oh yearning! Oh Longing!
Leave us alone!
For hot passion flows through
Our blood and our bones!
Every pore of our skin!
Every muscle n fiber!
Welded as one
We soar through loves light!
From Dawn of the Day
Pale light of the Moon
Oh Raven Hair Valentine !
My Passions Muse!
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Absolutely superb! I adored that poetry and yes it was exciting. As BPop stated, your muse is a most fortunate woman.
So, Hmrjmr, where do us single women find a guy that writes with such graceful eloquence? beautifully done, dear sir! hope you have a Happy Valentines day! :)
YOU IZ DA MAN.. Hmrjmr!!!!!
Hmr - you are so on target lately it is remarkable, but probably just ho-hum duty day for you! Love what you can do with a turn of the phrase - thanks for the pink ferrari - I'm still learning how to drive it! You must have a library of spectacular things there at your fingertips!
thanks for just being here hmr - as if you could ever JUST be here!
Is it hot in here?? VERY erotic, John! Ya know, my hair is very dark in the winter - lol! In the summer it bleaches out from the pool and the sun.
Dang I need a smoke after reading this one,..LOL. I absolutely love your poetry,... We should have Valentines Day more often.
Oh my I do declare that was a romantic poem. Im gonna start calling you Rhett Butler. Nice.
All I can say is ((( WOW ))). This poem is great! I liked it.
Well, I can turn off the space heater now. Oh my.
Great poem Hmrjmr. Its rare to find beautiful words that can be both arousing and romantic at the same time. Most sway in one direction or the other, but, IMHO, they should always go hand in hand.
This is so arousing, I feel my body vibrate to your words... The kind of poetry I would love to inspire!
Feel the heat *sizzle* !!! A man who writes arousing poetry has my vote (and my attention!)!! I think the snow's melting around me.... xox
Great poem!
I will have some very good dreams tonight! Your poem is sooooooooooooo passionate! What a man!
That is pretty! Don't know how I missed it last year, but maybe it was meant for this year. :)






















breakfastpop Level 8 Commenter 2 years ago
Dear hmrjmr,
You are surprising and amazing. Whoever your Muse is, she's very lucky.