Raven Hair Valentine

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By Hmrjmr1

Ok guys here is some help, I figure so many guys don’t have poems in them, I thought I’d go ahead and do a few for the Hub mob this week, I won’t copyright any of them till Feb 16tth so you can use them as you see fit. We start with one inspired by one of my Hub Muses, Though I will not kiss and tell, so if you think it’s you, if you think you have stirred what passions reside in the little furnace of my heart, then you’re probably right! I love ya!

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Raven Hair Valentine

Oh ye so fair of Raven Hair

Love sparkles in your Eyes;

The curve of hip and breast and thigh

Speak of hearts pleasures

Textured skin in cool fresh air

As soft red silk robe falls leaving it bare.

Sun lights soft breast

Drawing shadow and crevice

Round loves sweet orbs

Pink pinnacles high

Inviting soft kiss

As they point to the sky…

Soft sweet crown of your shoulder

Oh silky smooth neck

Loves nibble ‘pon here and here and there

Large hands I slowly draw

up sweeping curves of your back

As heat of the moment

Begins passions sweet yearning

The breeze through the Window

Can not cool Passions flame!

The wind does but fan it white hot in my brain..

The forge of my heart glows red in the night

As raven hair I kiss, and hip and thigh

Soft knee, and calf, ankles and toes

My lips do cuddle dare say I caress?

Now oneness we seek

From our hips to our lips

Oh yearning! Oh Longing!

Leave us alone!

For hot passion flows through

Our blood and our bones!

Every pore of our skin!

Every muscle n fiber!

Welded as one

We soar through loves light!

From Dawn of the Day

Pale light of the Moon

Oh Raven Hair Valentine !

My Passions Muse!

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breakfastpop profile image

breakfastpop Level 8 Commenter 2 years ago

Dear hmrjmr,

You are surprising and amazing. Whoever your Muse is, she's very lucky.

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Hmrjmr1 Hub Author 2 years ago

BPOP - I'll never tell who for there are many

They caress and croon they beat and they strain

these humble ol' words right out of my brain!

Thanks!

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Pamela99 Level 7 Commenter 2 years ago

Absolutely superb! I adored that poetry and yes it was exciting. As BPop stated, your muse is a most fortunate woman.

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Hmrjmr1 Hub Author 2 years ago

Pam _ Thank you and I repeat when it comes to the muse I'll never tell... (I hope she is a lucky gal though)

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Dame Scribe Level 2 Commenter 2 years ago

So, Hmrjmr, where do us single women find a guy that writes with such graceful eloquence? beautifully done, dear sir! hope you have a Happy Valentines day! :)

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carolina muscle Level 1 Commenter 2 years ago

YOU IZ DA MAN.. Hmrjmr!!!!!

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Hmrjmr1 Hub Author 2 years ago

Dame Scribe - Directions are but an email away,,,lol A Happy Valentines Day to you as well...

CM - I ams what I ams What I ams! (high Five) Thanks!

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mega1 Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago

Hmr - you are so on target lately it is remarkable, but probably just ho-hum duty day for you! Love what you can do with a turn of the phrase - thanks for the pink ferrari - I'm still learning how to drive it! You must have a library of spectacular things there at your fingertips!

thanks for just being here hmr - as if you could ever JUST be here!

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Hmrjmr1 Hub Author 2 years ago

Mega - No problem sweetie, it is just what I do,,,XOO

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habee Level 7 Commenter 2 years ago

Is it hot in here?? VERY erotic, John! Ya know, my hair is very dark in the winter - lol! In the summer it bleaches out from the pool and the sun.

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Hmrjmr1 Hub Author 2 years ago

Habee- Thanks for stopping by I'm working on Blonds, Redheads, big, slim, petit, and tall as well... Love Ya keep the biscuits coming! (After all that's the real way to a mans heart aint it?)

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Army Infantry Mom 2 years ago

Dang I need a smoke after reading this one,..LOL. I absolutely love your poetry,... We should have Valentines Day more often.

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Hmrjmr1 Hub Author 2 years ago

AIM - Glad for the release you and your Huny have a Happy Valentines Day!!

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ladyjane1 Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago

Oh my I do declare that was a romantic poem. Im gonna start calling you Rhett Butler. Nice.

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Hmrjmr1 Hub Author 2 years ago

Ladyjane - Frankly My Dear,,,, I'd be honored..Have a Happy Valentine Day XXOO

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Naomi R. Cox Level 1 Commenter 2 years ago

All I can say is ((( WOW ))). This poem is great! I liked it.

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Hmrjmr1 Hub Author 2 years ago

Naomi - So glad you liked it hope you have a Happy Valentines Day..

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ThoughtfulSpot 2 years ago

Well, I can turn off the space heater now. Oh my.

Great poem Hmrjmr. Its rare to find beautiful words that can be both arousing and romantic at the same time. Most sway in one direction or the other, but, IMHO, they should always go hand in hand.

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Hmrjmr1 Hub Author 2 years ago

TS - I would suspect your Huny holds such a Raven Haired Vixen when he cuddles you,,,, Have a Happy Valentines Day!!

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Anath 2 years ago

This is so arousing, I feel my body vibrate to your words... The kind of poetry I would love to inspire!

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Hmrjmr1 Hub Author 2 years ago

Tis the fate of a muse to not know for certain what she has inspired, but I must say you dear Anath have been a muse to me....Happy Valentines Day!!

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Beth100 Level 5 Commenter 2 years ago

Feel the heat *sizzle* !!! A man who writes arousing poetry has my vote (and my attention!)!! I think the snow's melting around me.... xox

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Hmrjmr1 Hub Author 2 years ago

Thanks Beth XXXXOOOO

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Raven King 2 years ago

Great poem!

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Hmrjmr1 Hub Author 2 years ago

So Glad you liked it Raven King ! Have a Happy Valentines Day!

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vocalcoach Level 7 Commenter 18 months ago

I will have some very good dreams tonight! Your poem is sooooooooooooo passionate! What a man!

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Hmrjmr1 Hub Author 18 months ago

May they be extra sweet ones VC! "Dream a little Dream of Me!"

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AEvans Level 7 Commenter 13 months ago

That is pretty! Don't know how I missed it last year, but maybe it was meant for this year. :)

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Hmrjmr1 Hub Author 13 months ago

AEvans - It's meant for a day (any day) you're in love. So glad you liked it.

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